考研英语待批改作文：

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　　第二篇

　　Dear Bob，

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you to help me to improve my English during these days. If it had not been for your assistance in teaching me various knowledge including the culture of English, Then help me to practice English face to face, I fear that I would have been seek to the way of learning English for a long time without your help.

　　Everyone agrees that it was you who are warmly and likely to help others without the pay. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Bob，

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you to help me to improve my English during these days. If it had not been for your assistance in teaching me various knowledge including the culture of English, Then(删除) help me to practice English face to face, I fear that I would have been seek to the way of learning English for a long time without your help.(删除)

　　Every one agrees that it was you who are warmly and likelyto help others without the pay. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　4分

　　同学你好，写完书信要有yours sincerely 和 你的名字。英语的句号是.此外，建议你看一下关于强调句和虚拟语气的知识。

　　考研英语待批改作文：

　　0-4分

　　第二篇

　　Dear Bob，

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you to help me to improve my English during these days. If it had not been for your assistance in teaching me various knowledge including the culture of English, Then help me to practice English face to face, I fear that I would have been seek to the way of learning English for a long time without your help.

　　Everyone agrees that it was you who are warmly and likely to help others without the pay. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Bob，

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you to help me to improve my English during these days. If it had not been for your assistance in teaching me various knowledge including the culture of English, Then(删除) help me to practice English face to face, I fear that I would have been seek to the way of learning English for a long time without your help.(删除)

　　Every one agrees that it was you who are warmly and likelyto help others without the pay. Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　4分

　　同学你好，写完书信要有yours sincerely 和 你的名字。英语的句号是.此外，建议你看一下关于强调句和虚拟语气的知识。