考研英语待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第二篇

　　Dear Mr.Li，

　　I am truly sorry that I cannot go to your birthday party this Sunday as a result of an unexpected examination.

　　The reason is that my teacher suddenly informs me to take an examination next Monday and I have not recited the textbooks well. Moreover, this examination is very likely to decide whether could I study abroad or not. Therefore, I could not go to your birthday party this Sunday. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Mr.Li，

　　I am truly sorry that I cannot go to your birthday party this Sunday as a result of an unexpected examination.

　　The reason is that my teacher suddenly informs me to take an examination next Monday and I have not recited the textbooks well. Moreover, this examination is very likely to decide whether could I(改为I could) study abroad or not. Therefore, I could not go to your birthday party this Sunday. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　7分

　　同学你好，你的作文思路不错，宾语从句是正常语序。

　　考研英语待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第二篇

　　Dear Mr.Li，

　　I am truly sorry that I cannot go to your birthday party this Sunday as a result of an unexpected examination.

　　The reason is that my teacher suddenly informs me to take an examination next Monday and I have not recited the textbooks well. Moreover, this examination is very likely to decide whether could I study abroad or not. Therefore, I could not go to your birthday party this Sunday. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Mr.Li，

　　I am truly sorry that I cannot go to your birthday party this Sunday as a result of an unexpected examination.

　　The reason is that my teacher suddenly informs me to take an examination next Monday and I have not recited the textbooks well. Moreover, this examination is very likely to decide whether could I(改为I could) study abroad or not. Therefore, I could not go to your birthday party this Sunday. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　7分

　　同学你好，你的作文思路不错，宾语从句是正常语序。