考研英语待批改作文：

　　8-10分

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I just read an advertisement in a magazine about job searchingI would like to apply for a position as a sales manager.

　　I understand efficient marketing strategy .My communication skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your conditions in the advertisement .I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a bachelor degree in marketing management. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a salesman at ABC Company during my spare time. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam ,

　　I just read an advertisement in a magazine about job searching (加逗号)I would like to apply for a position as a sales manager.

　　I understand efficient marketing strategy .My communication skills(去掉s), as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your conditions in the advertisement .I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a bachelor degree in marketing management. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a salesman at ABC Company during my spare time. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　8分

　　同学你好，你的作文写的很不错，但是要明确一点，要灵活使用模版，因为skill 前面填的是具体的某项能力，所有要用单数，如果是填一个形容词，例如professional，那么就可以用复数了。

　　考研英语待批改作文：

　　8-10分

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I just read an advertisement in a magazine about job searchingI would like to apply for a position as a sales manager.

　　I understand efficient marketing strategy .My communication skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your conditions in the advertisement .I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a bachelor degree in marketing management. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a salesman at ABC Company during my spare time. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam ,

　　I just read an advertisement in a magazine about job searching (加逗号)I would like to apply for a position as a sales manager.

　　I understand efficient marketing strategy .My communication skills(去掉s), as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your conditions in the advertisement .I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a bachelor degree in marketing management. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a salesman at ABC Company during my spare time. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　8分

　　同学你好，你的作文写的很不错，但是要明确一点，要灵活使用模版，因为skill 前面填的是具体的某项能力，所有要用单数，如果是填一个形容词，例如professional，那么就可以用复数了。