2024年1月19日雅思写作评析及26日预测

　　Task 1

　　Pie charts

　　The pie charts show the the comment of the ranges of books in university

　　点评：上次考试结束后，饼成为了考试的重点。本次考试中的饼成为了考试的题目，从今天的考题来看，考察的是双饼的数据描述，考生在描述数据时应注意表达的多样性。

　　参考范文：

　　The charts compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000. Between these years electricity production almost doubled, rising from 100 units to 170 in Australia, and from 90 to 180 units in France.

　　In 1980 Australia used coal as the main electricity source and the remainder was produced from natural gas, hydro power and oil . By 2000, coal had become the fuel for more than 75% of electricity produced and only hydro continued to be another significant source supplying approximately 20%.

　　In contrast, France used coal as a source for only 25 units of electricity in 1980, which was matched by natural gas. The remaining 40 units were produced largely from oil and nuclear power, with hydro contributing only 5 units. But by 2000 ，nuclear power, which was not used at all in Australia, had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units, while coal and oil together produced only 50 units. Other sources were no longer significant.

　　Overall, it is clear that by 2000 these two countries relied on different principal fuel sources: Australia relied on coal and France on nuclear power.

　　下期考试预测： 地图题表格线

　　参考练习：

　　Task 2:

　　Food has become cheaper and food production has increased thanks to enlarged manufacturing capacity, the use of fertilizer and better machinery. However, some believe this will do harm to the health of humans and local community as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　点评： 本次考试涉及到的是科技类话题，这个话题看上去很新。但是大家会发现本题的问法是to what extent do you agree or disagree?这一类型的文章中对文章结构没有特殊的要求，可以写单边式也可以写双边式。

　　大作文还是会以单边式、双边式议论文为主，需要准备话题：

　　1. Some people commit crime again after they release from the prison, what are the main factors and what are the possible solutions?犯罪类

　　2. Some people believe that it is good for some old people to use mobile phone, especially in some emergency. While others believe it may bring some negative effect to them, to what extend do you agree or disagree?老龄化

　　3. The problem of obesity has be found in some areas, what are the main factors and what are the possible solutions? 青少年

　　4. In some countries, the percentage of young women commit crime has increased a lot, what are the main factors and what are the possible solutions?犯罪类

　　5. Long distance flight consumes natural resources and pollutes the air. Some people think it should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　环保类

　　6. Some people believe that the age of retirement should be fixed, while others believe that should be flexible. They can decide their retirement age in some degree, discuss the both sides and give your own opinion. 老龄化

　　7. Some people believe government should promote the healthy lifestyle. While others believe the money should be spent on meeting the basic need for citizens. To what extend do you agree or disagree?政府

　　8. In some countries, the prison became too crowded, what are the main factors and what are the possible solutions? 犯罪类

　　9. Some people think that the range of technology available to individuals makes the increasing of gaps between rich people and poor people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 全球化

　　10. In modern society, some people are undertaking too much Stress .what are the main factors and what are the possible solutions? 社会压力

　　11. some students are spending more and more time on computer games and televisions . what are the possible reasons and what are the possible effects?青少年

　　2024年1月19日雅思写作评析及26日预测

　　Task 1

　　Pie charts

　　The pie charts show the the comment of the ranges of books in university

　　点评：上次考试结束后，饼成为了考试的重点。本次考试中的饼成为了考试的题目，从今天的考题来看，考察的是双饼的数据描述，考生在描述数据时应注意表达的多样性。

　　参考范文：

　　The charts compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000. Between these years electricity production almost doubled, rising from 100 units to 170 in Australia, and from 90 to 180 units in France.

　　In 1980 Australia used coal as the main electricity source and the remainder was produced from natural gas, hydro power and oil . By 2000, coal had become the fuel for more than 75% of electricity produced and only hydro continued to be another significant source supplying approximately 20%.

　　In contrast, France used coal as a source for only 25 units of electricity in 1980, which was matched by natural gas. The remaining 40 units were produced largely from oil and nuclear power, with hydro contributing only 5 units. But by 2000 ，nuclear power, which was not used at all in Australia, had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units, while coal and oil together produced only 50 units. Other sources were no longer significant.

　　Overall, it is clear that by 2000 these two countries relied on different principal fuel sources: Australia relied on coal and France on nuclear power.

　　下期考试预测： 地图题表格线

　　参考练习：

　　Task 2:

　　Food has become cheaper and food production has increased thanks to enlarged manufacturing capacity, the use of fertilizer and better machinery. However, some believe this will do harm to the health of humans and local community as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　点评： 本次考试涉及到的是科技类话题，这个话题看上去很新。但是大家会发现本题的问法是to what extent do you agree or disagree?这一类型的文章中对文章结构没有特殊的要求，可以写单边式也可以写双边式。

　　大作文还是会以单边式、双边式议论文为主，需要准备话题：

　　1. Some people commit crime again after they release from the prison, what are the main factors and what are the possible solutions?犯罪类

　　2. Some people believe that it is good for some old people to use mobile phone, especially in some emergency. While others believe it may bring some negative effect to them, to what extend do you agree or disagree?老龄化

　　3. The problem of obesity has be found in some areas, what are the main factors and what are the possible solutions? 青少年

　　4. In some countries, the percentage of young women commit crime has increased a lot, what are the main factors and what are the possible solutions?犯罪类

　　5. Long distance flight consumes natural resources and pollutes the air. Some people think it should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　环保类

　　6. Some people believe that the age of retirement should be fixed, while others believe that should be flexible. They can decide their retirement age in some degree, discuss the both sides and give your own opinion. 老龄化

　　7. Some people believe government should promote the healthy lifestyle. While others believe the money should be spent on meeting the basic need for citizens. To what extend do you agree or disagree?政府

　　8. In some countries, the prison became too crowded, what are the main factors and what are the possible solutions? 犯罪类

　　9. Some people think that the range of technology available to individuals makes the increasing of gaps between rich people and poor people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 全球化

　　10. In modern society, some people are undertaking too much Stress .what are the main factors and what are the possible solutions? 社会压力

　　11. some students are spending more and more time on computer games and televisions . what are the possible reasons and what are the possible effects?青少年