浙江省2024高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（1）第二节

　　书面表达(满分分)

　　目前，食品安全问题引起了人们的厂泛关注。一些生产厂商为了降低成本追求利润，缺乏足够的安全措施，致使一些劣质或有害食品流市场，对人们的健康产生极大的危害。请你就此事给一家英文报刊写封信，谈谈个人看法并呼吁整个社会关注此事。

　　要求：词数10左右。(不包括所给内容)

　　参考词汇：利润：profit；安全措施：safety measures Dear Sir,

　　I' m writing to talk about the problems of food safety nowadays.

　　Yours truly，

　　Li Hua

　　With the rapid development of society, great changes have been taken place in family life. Many years ago, people considered them rich to own radios, sewing machines and watches. Most people live in crowded houses. When they went out , they had to walk and go by bike. Nowadays, life is more better than it was in the past. Many ordinary families have color TV sets, washing machine, mobile phones and the other modern equipment. People can often travel with train or plane. You can see high buildings everywhere. The rich prefers to buy a flat far from the busy city. No one can imagined what a great change we will have.

　　（第一行去掉been, 第二行把them改为it，第三行把live改为lived，把and改为or，第四行把more改为much或去掉，第五行把machine改为machines，并去掉the，把with改为by，第六行把prefers改为prefer，最后一行把imagined改为imagine）

　　书面表达

　　A possible version

　　Dear Sir, w*w*w*k*s*5*u*c*o*m

　　I' m writing to talk about the problems of food safety nowadays. In order to reduce the cost and make more profits, some food companies don’t take necessary safety measures to guarantee the food quality. As a result, more and more low-quality food flows into the market, doing a lot of harm to consumers' health.

　　In my opinion, food is essential to human beings. We can not live without proper food. If no notice were taken of food safety, the health of the whole nation would suffer. So I call on the whole society to take action and put an end to the low-quality food. Only in this way can we live a healthier life.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　浙江省2024高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（1）第二节

　　书面表达(满分分)

　　目前，食品安全问题引起了人们的厂泛关注。一些生产厂商为了降低成本追求利润，缺乏足够的安全措施，致使一些劣质或有害食品流市场，对人们的健康产生极大的危害。请你就此事给一家英文报刊写封信，谈谈个人看法并呼吁整个社会关注此事。

　　要求：词数10左右。(不包括所给内容)

　　参考词汇：利润：profit；安全措施：safety measures Dear Sir,

　　I' m writing to talk about the problems of food safety nowadays.

　　Yours truly，

　　Li Hua

　　With the rapid development of society, great changes have been taken place in family life. Many years ago, people considered them rich to own radios, sewing machines and watches. Most people live in crowded houses. When they went out , they had to walk and go by bike. Nowadays, life is more better than it was in the past. Many ordinary families have color TV sets, washing machine, mobile phones and the other modern equipment. People can often travel with train or plane. You can see high buildings everywhere. The rich prefers to buy a flat far from the busy city. No one can imagined what a great change we will have.

　　（第一行去掉been, 第二行把them改为it，第三行把live改为lived，把and改为or，第四行把more改为much或去掉，第五行把machine改为machines，并去掉the，把with改为by，第六行把prefers改为prefer，最后一行把imagined改为imagine）

　　书面表达

　　A possible version

　　Dear Sir, w*w*w*k*s*5*u*c*o*m

　　I' m writing to talk about the problems of food safety nowadays. In order to reduce the cost and make more profits, some food companies don’t take necessary safety measures to guarantee the food quality. As a result, more and more low-quality food flows into the market, doing a lot of harm to consumers' health.

　　In my opinion, food is essential to human beings. We can not live without proper food. If no notice were taken of food safety, the health of the whole nation would suffer. So I call on the whole society to take action and put an end to the low-quality food. Only in this way can we live a healthier life.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua