浙江省2024高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）

　　短文改错（满分10分）

　　下面短文中有10处错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2，只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　A survey basing on 1,000 students found that 80% of senior students slept less than

　　nine hours every night. Too much homework being given by school teachers is the main

　　cause. Another cause lies at students’ bad habits. Some students are absent-minded while

　　doing their homework, and some wasting their after-class time. The third cause is some

　　students have to get up earlier on weekdays to get to school which far away from home.

　　Experts think the amount of homeworks for the students should be cut down. Beside,

　　teachers should encourage their students make good use of their spare time.

　　第二节：书面表达（满分30分）

　　随着电脑普及率的提高，老师、家长和学生对字迹的重视程度降低了。据一项调查显示，有85.8％的中学生说自己的字迹不好看，而他们又不想改善字迹，其理由有很大差别。请根据下图写一篇100–120词的英文短文，说明该现象并发表自己的看法。

　　可以用电脑写字

　　51.5%

　　没有时间练

　　32.3%

　　没有什么用

　　10.9%

　　其他[

　　5.3%

　　改错

　　A survey basing on 1,000 students found that 80% of senior students slept less than

　　based

　　nine hours every night. Too much homework being given by school teachers is the main

　　cause. Another cause lies at students’ bad habits. Some students are absent-minded while

　　in

　　doing their homework, and some wasting their after-class time. The third cause is∧some

　　waste

　　that

　　students have to get up earlier on weekdays to get to school which far away from home.

　　early

　　(或加is)

　　Experts think the amount of homeworks for the students should be cut down. Beside,

　　homework

　　Besides

　　teachers should encourage their students∧make good use of their spare time.

　　to

　　作文：

　　One possible version:

　　Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, teachers, students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting.

　　According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting. 51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise. 10.9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless.

　　As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.

　　浙江省2024高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）

　　短文改错（满分10分）

　　下面短文中有10处错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2，只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　A survey basing on 1,000 students found that 80% of senior students slept less than

　　nine hours every night. Too much homework being given by school teachers is the main

　　cause. Another cause lies at students’ bad habits. Some students are absent-minded while

　　doing their homework, and some wasting their after-class time. The third cause is some

　　students have to get up earlier on weekdays to get to school which far away from home.

　　Experts think the amount of homeworks for the students should be cut down. Beside,

　　teachers should encourage their students make good use of their spare time.

　　第二节：书面表达（满分30分）

　　随着电脑普及率的提高，老师、家长和学生对字迹的重视程度降低了。据一项调查显示，有85.8％的中学生说自己的字迹不好看，而他们又不想改善字迹，其理由有很大差别。请根据下图写一篇100–120词的英文短文，说明该现象并发表自己的看法。

　　可以用电脑写字

　　51.5%

　　没有时间练

　　32.3%

　　没有什么用

　　10.9%

　　其他[

　　5.3%

　　改错

　　A survey basing on 1,000 students found that 80% of senior students slept less than

　　based

　　nine hours every night. Too much homework being given by school teachers is the main

　　cause. Another cause lies at students’ bad habits. Some students are absent-minded while

　　in

　　doing their homework, and some wasting their after-class time. The third cause is∧some

　　waste

　　that

　　students have to get up earlier on weekdays to get to school which far away from home.

　　early

　　(或加is)

　　Experts think the amount of homeworks for the students should be cut down. Beside,

　　homework

　　Besides

　　teachers should encourage their students∧make good use of their spare time.

　　to

　　作文：

　　One possible version:

　　Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, teachers, students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting.

　　According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting. 51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise. 10.9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless.

　　As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.