山东长岛县2024高考英语一轮短文改错选练

　　短文改错----议论文

　　2024届河北省邯郸市馆陶县一中高三7月调研考试

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　71.had改为 have

　　72. student 改为 students

　　73.do 改为 does

　　Do harm to 对。。有害。整篇文章用一般现在时来叙述。

　　74. realized 后的that去掉Relize后面引导宾语从句由how来引导，故把that去掉。

　　75.boring 改为 bored

　　Be bored with 厌烦。。。

　　76. other 改为 others

　　77.himself 改为 themselves

　　78. causing 改为 caused

　　79. the waste of money 中the 改为 a

　　A waste of sth浪费某物。

　　80. danger 改为 dangerous

　　2024模拟短文改错MToday we went to climb the West Hill．Early in morning

　　．______we started out and arrived an hour late．Then we began

　　．______to climb．The hill was high and some of us got tired

　　．______

　　soon, and all of us were very excited．We cheered

　　．______

　　happily when we got the top．We had our lunch there

　　．_______

　　and had enjoyed ourselves very much．Unfortunately，

　　．________

　　when we walked down the hill，We were caught by

　　．_______

　　a rain．We remained calmly，shared umbrellas and

　　8．_______

　　raincoats and walked carefully．Finally we both reached

　　．_______

　　the parking lot safely．In spite of the unexpecting rain

　　．______

　　and wind，we had a good time．

　　. morning前加the 考查冠词的用法。注意习语in the morning。

　　. late改为later

　　考查副词比较级的用法。此处表示“迟到了一小时”，故用比较级。

　　. 正确 经分析本句正确。

　　. and改为but

　　考查句间的逻辑关系。根据文意此处为转折关系。

　　. got后加to或got改为reached

　　考查动词的用法。此处the top作宾语，故改为got to 或及物动词reached。

　　. 去掉had

　　考查动词时态。根据句中的and可知，前后是并列关系，时态应一致。

　　. by改为in

　　考查介词的用法。解题关键：掌握动词catch的用法，be caught in意为：遭遇。。。。

　　8. calmlycalm 考查形容词的用法。此处remain为系动词，其后接形容词。

　　. both改为all

　　考查代词的用法。根据文意没有两者的范围。

　　. unexpecting改为unexpected考查分词的用法。此处unexpected意为：意料之外的。

　　短文改错N

　　Of all my teachers ,Mr. Moore is the one who impress me

　　1_____

　　most. He is 34, so he looks young for his age. And he’s one of

　　2______

　　the most popular teacher in our school. Mr. Moore pays more

　　3______

　　attention to his way of teaching, comparing with other teachers.

　　4_______

　　He tries different ways to make his classes actively and lively.

　　5______

　　In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but understand

　　6______

　　“why”. So, instead giving us answers immediately, he encourages us

　　7______

　　to think by myself whenever he puts forward questions. With his help,

　　8______

　　we’ve learned from how to settle problems. He leads us to such a

　　9_____

　　wonderful

　　world of “why” as we all admire and respect him.

　　10_____

　　【参考答案及解析】

　　1. impress改为impresses考查主谓一致。此处先行词one前有the，故其后定语从句的谓语动词应和one保持一致，用单数。

　　. so改为but 考查句间的逻辑关系。根据语境此处应为转折关系。

　　. teacher 改为teachers 考查名词的单复数。根据句中的one of 可知，后面的名词应用复数形式。

　　. comparing改为compared 考查固定短语。和。。。相比应用compared with/to。

　　. actively改为active 考查形容词的用法。此处make 后接形容词作宾补。

　　. 正确

　　经分析本句正确。

　　. instead后加of考查固定短语。根据后面的giving可知，其前应用介词of。

　　8. myself改为ourselves 考查代词指代一致。根据文意反身代词应和us相一致。故用ourselves。

　　. 去掉from

　　考查动词的用法。learn from意为：向。。。学习，此处不合文意。

　　. as改为that 考查固定句型。此处考查such。。。that。。。句型。

　　Dear sir,

　　Thank you very much for your letter. I pleased to hear 76._____________

　　about your holiday and the people you meet in Rome. It

　　77. _____________

　　sounded great fun and how I wish I could have been with

　　78. _____________

　　you. Thank you also for the stamps you sent them to me 79._____________

　　for my collection. Most of them were those what I had

　　80. _____________

　　been expecting for long. You said by your letter that 81. _____________

　　you wish to have some photos of me. Sorry to tell you, 82. _____________

　　I have little photos good enough to send to others. 83. _____________

　　Yet I will send you a photo of your family. Please 84. _____________

　　write soon and tell me what you are getting on with 85. _____________

　　your college life.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours,

　　Jason

　　【参考答案】

　　76.I后加am

　　77. meet →met

　　78.√

　　79.去掉them

　　80.what→that或去掉those

　　81. by →in

　　82.wish→wished

　　83.little→few

　　84.your→my

　　84.what→how

　　【短文改错】

　　Dear Mr. Brown,

　　I am writing to thank you with your kind help.

　　1___

　　Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in

　　2_____

　　English. My pronunciation was terribly. I could

　　3____

　　only speak a few words. But one and a half year later,

　　4____

　　I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot from your

　　5___

　　encouraging words. I will always remember what you

　　6____

　　said, “If you try to, you can be No 1 !”I hope you`ve

　　7、___

　　had pleasant journey home and will come to china

　　8、___

　　again sometimes in the future. I will write again

　　9____

　　and send you the photos we take together

　　10____

　　【参考答案】

　　Dear Mr. Brown,

　　I am writing to thank you with your kind help.

　　for

　　Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in

　　no

　　English .My pronunciation was terribly .I could

　　terrible

　　only speak a few words. But one and a half year later,

　　years

　　I now think English ∧fun to learn.I got a lot from your

　　is

　　encouraging words .I will always remember what you

　　right

　　said, “If you try to, you can be No 1 !”I hope you`ve

　　/to

　　had ∧pleasant journey home and will come to china

　　a

　　again sometimes in the future. I will write again sometime

　　and send you the photos we take together

　　took

　　【2024高考复习】阅读理解Eight days for just ￥12,000

　　Departure time：May，October 2024

　　Includes：

　　●

　　Return flights from 6 China’s airports to Naples

　　●

　　Return airport to hotel transport

　　●

　　Seven nights’ accommodation at the 3-star Hotel Nice

　　●

　　Breakfast

　　● The service of guides

　　● Government taxes

　　Join us for a wonderful holiday in one of the Europe’s most wonderful corners—Naples in Italy if you want to have a nice time in a beautiful small quiet place.The ancient Romans called the city “happy land” with attractive coastline，colorful towns，splendid views and the warm Mediterranean Sea.Your best choice for a truly memorable holiday!

　　Choose between the peaceful traditional villages of Sant’ Agata，setting on a hillside six miles away from Sorrento，or the more lively and well-known international resort town of Sorrento，with wonderful views over the Bay of Naples.

　　Breathtaking

　　scenery，famous

　　sights

　　and

　　European restaurants everywhere.From the mysterious Isle of Capri to the hunting ruins of Pompeii，and from the unforgettable “Amalfi Drive” to the delightful resorts (度假胜地) of Positano，Sorrento and Ravello，the area is a feast for the eyes！Join us，and you won’t be disappointed!

　　Price based on two tourists sharing a double room at the Hotel Nice.A single room，another ￥2,000.A group of ten college students，￥10,000 for each.

　　Like to know more？Telephone Newmarket Air Holidays Ltd.on：0845 -226 -7788(All calls charge at local rates)．

　　【语篇解读】　优美的海岸，缤纷的城镇，绚烂的风景，温暖的海水……神奇的意大利之旅将带给你难忘的享受、永恒的记忆。还在犹豫什么呢？赶快报名参加吧！

　　1．All the following are included in the price of ￥12,000 EXCEPT________.

　　A．transport between airport and hotel

　　B．telephone calls made by tourists

　　C．the service of guides to tourists

　　D．a double room for every two tourists

　　解析　细节理解题。根据“Includes”中的“Return airport to hotel transport”“The service of guides”和倒数第二段第一句“Price based on two tourists sharing a double room at the Hotel Nice.”可知，A、C、D均包括在内，但不包括游客打电话的费用，故选B。

　　答案　B

　　2．If you don’t like sharing a room with others，you have to pay________.

　　A．￥12,000

　　B．￥10,000

　　C．￥2,000

　　D．￥14,000

　　解析　推理判断题。根据倒数第二段中的“A single room，another ￥2,000.”可知住单间需要另外支付2 000元，由此可推断游客需要在原来的价格上再多付2 000元，即14 000元。

　　答案　D 3．If you like to visit historical sites，which of the following is your best choice?

　　A．Amalfi. B．Sant’ Agata.

　　C．Pompeii. D．Sorrento.

　　解析　推理判断题。根据倒数第三段第二句中的“the hunting ruins of Pompeii”可推知意大利古城庞贝是狩猎遗址，由此可推断它是历史名胜。

　　答案　C

　　4．Who is the advertisement intended for?

　　A．Potential tourists. B．College students.

　　C．Government officers.　

　　D

　　Old people

　　解析　推理判断题。结合文章中提到的费用、出发日期、服务项目、景点介绍以及联系方式等可推测本文的宣传对象是潜在的游客。

　　答案　A

　　阅读理解Parents are creating an “I want it now” generation by indulging children’s every demand at Christmas，say experts.Youngsters are becoming increasingly selfish，claim the education analysts.

　　Consumer-savvy children are forcing their families into racking up huge debts and risk becoming spoilt and dissatisfied in the future.

　　Behavioural consultant Chris Calland said，“Parents are desperate to make Christmas into a magical fairy tale for their kids.There’s nothing wrong with that as such.The problem arises when it means always giving into all our children’s demands—even if they are beyond our price range or not age-appropriate.”

　　Ms Calland，who runs “Santa Says No”

　　style sessions with

　　colleague Nicky Hutchinson，added，“Many of us go into so much debt providing the gifts our children want that we spend the rest of the year paying off the bills.Yet so often the parcels we’ve carefully wrapped，once opened，are just pushed away because the very thing our little boy or girl was once so desperate for，they have now lost interest in.”

　　Ms Calland and Ms Hutchinson have drawn up a list of guidelines to help parents manage their offspring’s Christmas lists this year.They say that adults can actually improve their relationships with their children by resisting “pester (纠缠) power”．

　　Ms Calland said，“All too often we say yes because we want an easier life when the fact is that we’re only building up problems for the future.We are helping create a generation of youngsters who are blind to the needs of others and the necessity of hard work.”

　　“Children learn fast—if we sometimes change our mind，they quickly realise it might be worth lying on the floor and screaming for it.Make sure you and your partner are working together on this.Be consistent.And try not to get caught up in competition with other families or friends.”

　　【语篇解读】　本文是时文阅读。由于父母对孩子圣诞节的要求无限制地满足，产生了“I want it now”一代。

　　5．What is the main problem with the “I want it now” generation?

　　A．They are quite self-centered.

　　B．They like to live in fairy tales.

　　C．They waste a lot of money on gifts.

　　D．They can’t keep their interest in gifts.

　　解析　细节理解题。从第一段最后一句中的“Youngsters are becoming increasingly selfish”以及倒数第二段中的“a generation of youngsters who are blind to the needs of others”可知“ I want it now”一代很自私、以自我为中心。

　　答案　A

　　6．What is probably the aim of “Santa Says No” style sessions?

　　A．To advise on how to wrap gifts properly.