贵州省桐梓县2024高考英语一轮写作阅读练习五

　　（2024高考训练）书面表达

　　你班将举行一次以“珍爱生命，遵守交规”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你按拟定的提纲用英语写一篇演讲稿。

　　1．经济发展，私家车增加；

　　2．违章驾驶，事故频发(主要原因为酒驾、超速和闯红灯)；

　　3．提高安全意识，并采取有力措施。

　　注意：1.词数100～120；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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　　【思路导航】

　　本文是限内容、给提纲的控制性作文，由于是写当下的社会现象，所以时态要以一般现happen或take place，且只能用主动语态不能用被动语态；“采取措施”用英语表达为“take steps(measures/action)”。

　　【参考范文】

　　With the rapid development of China's economy，more and more people own their private cars.Some drivers don't always obey the traffic rules，so traffic accidents are often happening.A recent survey shows in 2024 there are 26 million traffic illegal acts，an average of over 70 thousand a day.

　　Behind the numbers，we can see the seriousness of our country's road safety.The main reason for traffic accidents is drunk driving.Besides，running the red light and speeding also result in this situation.

　　In my point of view，we must take immediate action to reduce the traffic accidents.For example，drivers should be punished without mercy.At the same time，the government should call on people to obey the traffic rules.Only when we cut down the traffic accidents can we live a happier life.

　　[亮点点击]　此篇文章结构完整，短文使用了较灵活的句式，如简单句、并列句、状语从句和倒装句等，使文章长短句结合，错落有致。

　　亮点短语和词组：with the rapid development of，an average of，running the red light，without mercy，take action，call on，cut down，live a happier life。

　　高级句式：倒装句(Only when we cut down the traffic accidents can we live a happier life.)；被动语态(For example，drivers should be punished without mercy.)。

　　书面表达

　　某英文报近期举办以“感恩与我同行”为主题的英语征文大赛。请你根据右图及提示的内容写一篇感恩老师的英文短文参赛。

　　主要内容如下：

　　(1)感谢老师的关心鼓励；

　　(2)感谢老师的辛勤劳动；

　　(3)感谢老师的谆谆教诲；

　　(4)词数150左右。

　　注意：短文须围绕“感恩与我同行”的主题。

　　Thanks to You，My Teacher

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　　【参考范文】

　　Thanks_to_You，My_Teacher

　　I would like to thank you for all the help you have given me.You are very friendly to everyone in our class.You always get on very well with us students.

　　What impresses me most is that you are not only our teacher but also our friend.You are always so patient whenever we ask you questions.We are all moved when you listen carefully and explain everything so thoroughly.You show us different ways to learn English.We feel so encouraged and become more comfortable in your class.You make your class so lively and interesting that every one of us is always eager to participate and practice.Our English has improved so much.

　　You teach us not only how to learn English well but also how to be good citizens.We owe much to you，my teacher.

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　　现在全社会都在倡导低碳生活，呵护地球家园。而每年的元宵节，你所在的城市都要举行一场20分钟的焰火晚会。据报道：一场这样的焰火晚会耗资大约150万元。市民为此议论纷纷。请你以“Is it Wise to Celebrate the Lantern Festival with Fireworks？”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对此的看法。

　　要求：1.不要逐字翻译所给素材；

　　2．为了使行文流畅，可适当发挥；

　　3．词数120左右。

　　Is it Wise to Celebrate the Lantern Festival with Fireworks?

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　　【参考范文】

　　Is_it_Wise_to_Celebrate_the_Lantern_Festival_with_Fireworks?

　　In China，it's a custom to celebrate the Lantern Festival by setting off fireworks.Is it wise to celebrate the Lantern Festival with fireworks?

　　In my city，there is an annual firework show sponsored by the government.It is true that setting off fireworks does offer relaxation and excitement to the citizens.However，I don't think it is wise to celebrate the Lantern Festival in this way.My reasons are as follows.

　　Firstly，it is really a waste of money.The fireworks last only 30 minutes，but it costs about 1.5 million yuan，which can be used for the city construction.Secondly，while fireworks are wonderful to look at，they cause air pollution.Besides，some unexpected fires might break out，causing heavy damage and loss.

　　In conclusion，celebrating the Lantern Festival with fireworks isn't necessary.

　　【2024高考英语湖北省武昌区调研试题】

　　短文写作（共1题；满分30分）

　　请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

　　As students in Senior Grade 3,we are under great pressure of the College Entrance Examination and quite often feel depressed． However, if we are realistic about our abilities and o our best to achieve our goals, we can always be happy in school．

　　短文写作（共1题；满分30分）

　　Sample writing:

　　How can we be happy under the great pressure of the College Entrance Examination? The answer lies in the fact that we can have an objective understanding of our abilities and set a reasonable goal. Furthermore, what really matters is that we have tried our best to achieve them.

　　In junior middle school, I was one of the top ten students in my school. I was confident and happy. But things have changed since I started senior school. However hard I tried, I was unable to be listed on the top one hundred. I felt stressed and depressed. After thinking carefully, I painfully realized that I was not as smart as I imagined. To my comfort, I have always been doing my best and I have never wasted a single hour.

　　What makes me proud is that all my hard work paid off at last.

　　In our life voyage, we can’t change the direction of the wind, but we can adjust our sails to reach our destinations. Be realistic and hardworking, and we can always be happy enough to live through our hard school life.

　　【2024高考英语湖北省襄阳市统考试题】

　　短文写作（共1题：满分30分）

　　请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

　　A goal can guide us in the right direction, so a life without a goal is just like a travelling ship without a compass．

　　注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

　　④词数为l20左右。

　　短文写作：

　　一、评分原则：

　　1．本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。

　　2．先根据文章内容和语言初步确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。评分档次的确定应在内容符合题目要求的前提下侧重于语言的表达

　　3．词数少于100的，将分数降低一个档次。

　　4．评分时主要关注：内容切题，语言表达准确、多样、连贯、得体。

　　5．拼写与标点符号，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，但英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

　　6．书写较差，以至于影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

　　二、书面表达各档次的划分及给分范围

　　第五档（很好）：（25～30分） 要点完整，表达清楚，无重大语法错误

　　完全完成了试题规定的任务。 —所有内容与提示吻合。 —应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇。 —语法结构或词汇运用准确，虽有个别错误，但不影响意义的表达，具备较强的语言运用能力。 —恰当地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。

　　第四档（好）：（19～24分） 表达基本清楚，缺少个别要点，有些语法错误。

　　完成了试题规定的任务。 —主要内容与提示吻合。 —应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 —语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，个别错误对意义的表达—影响。

　　--较恰当地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构较紧凑。 达到了预期的写作目的。

　　第三档（适当）：（13～18分）尚能表达，缺少多个要点，语法错误较多。

　　基本完成了试题规定的任务。 —主要内容与提示比较吻合。 —应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 —有一些语法结构和词汇的错误，对意义的表达有较大影响。 —基本能使用语句间的连接成分，全文结构比较松散。 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。

　　第二档（较差）：（7～12分）表达含糊不清，不能成篇。

　　未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 —主要内容与提示基本吻合。 —语法结构单调，应用词汇有限。 —有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。 —语句间的连接成分运用不当，缺少连贯性。 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。

　　第一档（差）：（1～6分）动了笔，仅罗列了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。

　　未能完成试题规定的任务。 —主要内容与提示不太吻合 —语法结构单一，应用词汇项十分有限。 —较多语法结构或词汇方面的严重错误，严重影响了意义的表达。 —缺乏语法之间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 信息未能传达给读者。

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　　未能传达给读者任何信息，内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

　　One possible version:

　　In order to succeed ,we should realize the importance of life goal ．Without a clear goal ,we will feel confused and lost while if a goal is set ,we may make a sensible schedule and confirm to it ．

　　I was not aware what I wanted to chase until the discussion what is My Chinese Dream was held in my class last term． I used to believe that it made no difference whether I studied hard or not to our nation． The fate of a country had nothing to do with the individual student． Fortunately, because of the hot discussion from my classmates, I have transformed my mind． Now, I’m conscious I have to devote all my passion to achieving my personal goal as well as to striving for the great revival of the motherland．

　　With the life goal set, we can achieve anything we want．

　　(由2024·湖北卷)

　　You've flown halfway around the world；you've sniffed out this place that nobody in Falongland or Thailand seems to have ever heard of；so what on earth is there to do here？You consider this question as you sink into an old wooden beach chair that holds you above the sand.

　　It was a long journey from Bangkok to Huaplee.By the time you found the bus station and got yourself sorted out，it took almost as long as the flight from Falongland.

　　Huaplee is located just south of Hua Hin，about two hundred kilometres from Bangkok，down the west side of the Gulf of Thailand. Not many tourists find this place，and the ones that do wonder if finding it has been their purpose all along.

　　There's an apparent laziness that surrounds you here.It's what this place offers，and it's free of charge.The small waves that tap the shoreline seem to slow everything down.You settle into your beach chair in preparation for a long rest.You sit there and watch the sea.

　　It's early afternoon，so the cook comes out and asks what you'd like to eat this evening.Before long he's rushed off to the market to buy the ingredients for whatever it was that you ordered－every meal fresh and to order.No menu here.

　　There is no poolside noise here but just that wonderfully warm，clear blue sea.There's no street noise.The only sounds are the murmurs of nature.

　　For now you just count your blessings (福祉)，listing them in the sand with your toe (脚趾)．You don't have to worry about being late for work. You don't have to do anything.

　　The beach to your right stretches off to the horizon (地平线)，slowly narrowing to nothingness only to reemerge again on your left，now steadily widening until it covers the chair beneath you.Sand to your left and sand to your right; it's unbroken，endless.No start，no end，just sand，sun，and peace.Step off it，and you re-enter the world of traffic，stress，work，and hurry.

　　Normally you're the type who can't sit still for more than ten minutes，but you're on Huaplee Lazy Beach now and，in the right frame of mind，it stretches all the way around the world.

　　“How could it take me so long to find it？” you wonder.

　　．When the author first went to Huaplee Beach，________.

　　A．he found it unworthwhile

　　B．he failed to sort himself out

　　C．he became sensitive to smell

　　D．he had difficulty in finding it

　　．What is special about the food service at Huaplee Beach?

　　A．No menu.

　　B．Free food.

　　C．Self service.

　　D．Quick delivery.

　　3．In the author's opinion，a tourist can enjoy Huaplee Beach most when he ________.

　　A．sits in a beach chairB．forgets his daily routine

　　C．plans a detailed scheduleD．draws pictures in the sand

　　．What does the author imply by his question at the end of the passage?

　　A．He shouldn't have counted his blessings.

　　B．He should have understood the wonder of nature.

　　C．He shouldn't have spent so much time on the trip.

　　D．He should have come to the place earlier.

　　答案：

　　【语篇解读】　本文是一篇旅游杂记，介绍了泰国一个静谧的海滩，描述了这里的环境给人的慵懒的感觉。在这里，你可以忘掉职场上的疲惫和匆忙，也可以真正地无所事事。宁静的气息让你不禁感叹应该早点儿来这个地方。

　　．D　解析：推理判断题。作者没有直接说自己第一次来这里的情况或感受，但他提到了找到这个地方是多么不容易：have flown halfway around the world；a long journey from Bangkok to Huaplee；it took almost as long as the flight from Falongland，因此选D。

　　．A　解析：细节理解题。第五段中的Before long he's rushed off to the market to buy the ingredients for whatever it was that you ordered－every meal fresh and to order.No menu here.意为“不管你点什么菜，不久他就会急忙去市场买原料——每餐都是新鲜的、定做的。没有菜单”。由此可知A项“没有菜单”正确，而非“饭菜免费”“自助”或“送餐快速”。